最近最远的人

2009.11.27

  一路风雨走过来
  只为寻找梦中的爱
  一次次的误解
  是因为对你太在意
  一路风雨走过来
  只为寻找梦中的爱
  一次次的伤害
  是因为和你太亲近
  一次次想离开你
  可你总在我心上
  一次次想靠近你
  总也走不进你心里
  最近的人是你和我
  最远的人是我和你
  爱到深处 此情最难留
  最近的人是你和我
  最远的人是我和你
  留在梦中 天长地久
  最近的人是你和我
  最远的人是我和你
  爱到深处 此情最难留
  最近的人是你和我
  最远的人是我和你
  留在梦中 天长地久
  留在梦中 天长地久。

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电视剧《新女驸马》台词

2009.11.26

冯素贞:兆廷,你来晚了,你失约了。
李兆廷:是我不好,我来晚了,晚了一个时辰。
冯素贞:一个时辰?不,你晚了一辈子,整整一辈子。
李兆廷:一辈子?
冯素贞:一辈子。三年之约,子时相会。我已经答应父亲,去比武招亲。
李兆廷:十八年的情,我们两个十八年的情爱,难道连一个时辰也抵不上吗?
冯素贞:我等了你整整三年,一千零九十五个日夜,你知道我是怎么过来的吗?你知道等待的痛苦、等待的劳累吗?

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Hallelujah

2009.11.12

Jeff Buckley

I heard there was a secret chord
that David played and it pleased the Lord
But you don’t really care for music, do you?(注解1)
Well it goes like this :
The fourth, the fifth, the minor fall and the major lift
The baffled king composing Hallelujah

我听见了那神秘悠扬的旋律
那是以色列王(David)为取悦上帝而奏
但也许你并不在意旋律本身,不是吗?
音乐却是这样起来的
第4,第5,小调落下,大调升起
饱受煎熬的国王写下了赞美之歌-哈利路亚

Hallelujah Hallelujah Hallelujah Hallelujah…
哈利路亚,哈利路亚,哈利路亚““`

Your faith was strong but you needed proof
You saw her bathing on the roof
Her beauty and the moonlight overthrew you(注解2)
And she tied you to her kitchen chair
She broke your throne and she cut your hair(注解3)
But from your lips she drew the Hallelujah

你信念坚定却也要受到考验
你在屋顶上看到她在那里沐浴
她的美貌在月光下就已经把你征服
她会把你骗到坐上厨房里的椅子上
推翻你的宝座,并剪下你的发丝
为了听到你的唇边的赞美之歌-哈利路亚

Hallelujah Hallelujah Hallelujah Hallelujah…
哈利路亚,哈利路亚,哈利路亚“““`

Baby I’ve been here before
I’ve seen this room and I’ve walked this floor
I used to live alone before I knew ya
And I’ve seen your flag on the marble arch
and love is not a victory march
It’s a cold and it’s a broken Hallelujah
亲爱的,告诉你,之前我来过这里
看到过这个房子,并走在地板上…
认识你之前,我习惯了独自生活
我也看到过,你在大理石拱门上留下的标志
爱 对我来说并不是胜利的进行曲
而是一曲冷酷和破灭的哈利路亚之歌

Hallelujah Hallelujah Hallelujah Hallelujah…
哈利路亚,哈利路亚,哈利路亚

There was a time when you let me know
What’s really going on below
But now you never show that to me do ya
But remember when I moved in you
And the holy dove was moving too
And every breath we drew was Hallelujah

以前,你会让我明白
逝去的真正意味着什么
而现在,你却从不会那样告诉我了,对吗?
记得,每次我渐渐靠近你的时候
圣洁的鸽子也一样慢慢地靠近你
我们每次的呼吸都是对上帝的赞美之声-哈利路亚

Hallelujah Hallelujah Hallelujah
哈利路亚 哈利路亚

Maybe there’s a God above
But all I’ve ever learned from love
Was how to shoot somebody who outdrew you
It’s not a cry that you hear at night
It’s not somebody who’s seen the light
It’s a cold and it’s a broken Hallelujah

也许真的有天主在上
而我曾学会的爱
却是 如何去伤害那个被我看中的人
你根本听不到夜晚的哭泣声
也没有人能看到夜里的光明
只有冷酷和毁灭的哈利路亚之歌

Hallelujah Hallelujah Hallelujah Hallelujah…
哈利路亚….

Hallelujah by Jeff Buckley

梦开始飘向一个孤独但不失美丽的远方。我们曾经如此骄傲。如此的以为自己可以不食人间烟火。但这只是梦,当音乐结束,巨大的夜扑面而来,你还有什么可以矜持的吗?!

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Hone Your Writing Skills For Professional Success

2009.11.07

By Dawn Josephson
http://www.lifetoolsforwomen.com/m/writing-skills.htm

The sales letter you can’t put down…the advertising copy that makes you want the product…the resume that prompts you to call the job candidate this second…All these are examples of exceptional business writing. While you certainly know good writing when you see it, can you write with the same pizzazz the professionals use to hold your attention for pages on end?

In today’s business world, writing skills have taken a backseat to other seemingly more important corporate development activities. Most business executives would rather attend a seminar on negotiation strategies or marketing tactics rather than learn the proper usage of “that” or “which” in a sentence. What they fail to realize, however, is that good writing skills are just as important to their future success as is their ability to locate prospects and close deals. Without good writing skills, your printed documents may very well undermine the professional image you work so hard to achieve.

The fact is that your prospects, your clients, and even the media judge you and your business based on the written documents you put out to the world. Sales letters riddled with errors, advertising copy that is boring, and media announcements that ramble on for pages send the message that you’re careless, uncreative, and possibly incapable of delivering quality work. People want to do business only with those individuals they perceive as knowledgeable and competent. Your writing is the perfect opportunity to showcase your professionalism and win the deal.

Tricks of the Trade
You don’t have to be a professional editor or journalist to write effectively. In fact, there are a number of self-editing techniques professional writers use to catch embarrassing errors that could cost them the job. Use these guidelines as a way to proofread your own writing so you can make all your printed materials reflect the professionalism you display in every other business activity.

Reread your work out loud
After they write a document, most people reread it to themselves to scan for errors. While this is certainly a good start, it should not be your sole means of proofreading. After scanning the document silently, read it out loud and really listen to the words you’re saying. Does your tongue stumble over a block of words? Do certain phrases sound funny or out of place? Is a sentence so long that you’re gasping for breath by the time you reach the period? Do your own words put you to sleep?

All these are signs that a section of your document needs some tweaking. When you read a document to yourself, you’re relying on only your eyes to catch writing errors. However, when you read a document out loud, you’re activating your sense of hearing and forcing your brain to concentrate on each individual word rather than visual cluster. Now you not only see missing commas, incorrect words, or subject-verb disagreements, but you can also hear when something sounds out of place. When you hear as well as see what you’re writing, you can catch more errors and produce a written document that holds the reader’s attention.

Rely on yourself, not your spell check
The spell-check feature on your computer is both a blessing and a hindrance to writing success. While spell check can locate and correct blatantly misspelled words, it can’t catch those words that are spelled correctly but used incorrectly. You know the words: right/write, meet/meat, you’re/your, there/their/they’re, no/know, plus a host of others. Such words, called homonyms, are often immune to computerized spell check features and can single-handedly undermine your writing skills.

As you reread your document, both silently and out loud, pay special attention to known homonyms and read out your contractions. So if your text reads, “Please know which word *you’re* supposed to use,” proofread it as “Please know which word *you are* supposed to use.” This way you’ll be able to catch those instances when you write, “You’re writing skills are impeccable,” but really mean “Your writing skills are impeccable.”

Start from the end
The more you read something, the more your brain begins to memorize it. If you reread a document over and over, you eventually get to the point where your brain knows what’s coming next, so your eyes go into scan mode. While you think you’re really reading the document closely, your brain is only picking up key words and drawing on memory to fill in the blanks.

So even though your 50th read-through confirms that your document is error-free, your reader (who has never seen the document before) will quickly spot careless errors you scanned right over. When you feel that you’ve read your document too many times and can’t get past scan mode, mix things up for your brain. Read the last sentence of your document first just to check for things like sentence structure, grammar, spelling, etc. Then read the sentence above the last and do the same. Pull sentences out of the text at random and check for errors.

By treating each sentence as a stand alone unit rather than as part of a flowing document, your brain will perk up and not be anticipating the next memorized line. You’ll catch more errors when you look at the individual elements of your document instead of focusing on the overall content.

Go to the experts
You may have a dictionary on your office bookshelf and perhaps even a thesaurus. But do you have a good grammar guide? Anyone who produces written documents can quickly improve his or her writing simply by referring to a grammar guide for writing tips. Your local bookstore has many grammar guides available. Browse through a few to determine which one adequately addresses your particular writing challenges.

Some guides focus specifically on grammar issues, while others pay particular attention to matters of writing tone and style. Some target fiction writers or journalists, while others angle their topics to business writing. Choose a guide you’re comfortable with, refer to it often, and watch your writing improve.

Better Writing Now
Competition in business is fierce these days. Don’t let a misspelled word or incorrect sentence kill the deal. Practice the tricks of self-editing so every written document you produce showcases your knowledge, competence, and professionalism. Before you know it, your prospects and clients will be unable to resist your written messages, and your company’s profits will soar.